How to Face Leave （part 1）
One month ago, my father was disgnosed late rectal cancer. At that time, I was running in the school's playground and suddenly knew this information by my mother phone. Then I was stiff and look was sluggish because everthing happens without any indication. Tears kept rolling over my cheek and my hands trembling. “Cancer” and “Later period” everybody knows what they mean.
Subsequently, I quiveringly went to the subway station so that I could arrive at the hospital which my father in as quickly as possible.During this period,my mind was blank and I just cried.“I will have no father”,this saying lingering in my ears all the time.It was the slowest subway I had took.
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Lana, I am so sorry. I feel great sadness for you, and I wish strength for your father.
I will try to correct your Notebook.
How to Face Leave Loss（part 1）
One month ago, my father was disgnosed with late stage rectal cancer. At that time, I was running in the school's playground and suddenly knew learned this information by my mother phone. Then At the time I was stiff froze, and I must have looked weak was sluggish because everthing happened without any indication. Tears kept rolling rolled over my cheeks and my hands were trembling. “Cancer” and “Later period Late stage” everybody knows what they mean.Subsequently, I quiveringly went to the subway station so that I could arrive at the hospital which where my father was in as quickly as possible.During this period,my mind was blank and I just cried.“I will have no father”,this saying lingering in my ears all the time.It was the slowest subway I had took.
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