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The Transformers ,I love you! My husband and I went to see the new film <The Transformers 3> last night. I love the film very much. Many people like it, the cinema was very crowded. Luckily, I bought the movie tickets for 3D very early, or I could not get into the cinema. I never thought of to be a fan of any popular singer or the most handsome actor. But I am really crazy at the Transformers. They are brave and full of justice. The music in the film made the audiences so excited. In the hot summer night (the temperature was about 34 degrees outside),nearly 100 people sat in the same room to see a so nervous (I am not sure of this word, I don't know how to describe the film, it made us nervous) film. You could imagine the hotness. Of course, I could guess the result of the film was "the justice beats down the evil". While, the circuitous story really made me afraid. Sentinel Prime betraied Optimus Prime, Bumblebee was on the brink of dying. At the point of the crisis, Optimus Prime would appear and save the day. I once hoped to see the aliens from other planets. I believe there are some other living beings live in the universe. God bless us, they will never fight us. I love Bumblebee most. He is so cool! The American army and their Tomahawk cruise missiles are very great, too. I like this film, what about you? When I was on the way home after the film (was finished-I don't know if this is needed), I considered all the cars on the road as the transformers! Hahaha Questions: I am not sure of the "tense" when I talk of a film. I mean, should I use the past tense or the present tense? I was completely confused. : (

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The Transformers ,I love you!

My husband and I went to see the new film last night. I loved the film very much. Many people liked it, and the cinema was very crowded. Luckily, I bought the movie tickets for 3D very early, or I couldn't have gotten  not get into the cinema.
I never thought of myself to be a fan of any popular singer or the most handsome actor, but I am really crazy at about the Transformers. They are brave and full of justice.
The music in the film made the audiences so excited. In the hot summer night (the temperature was about 34 degrees outside),nearly 100 people sat in the same room to see a so nervous (I am not sure of this word, I don't know how to describe the film, it made us nervous) thrilling film. You could can imagine the hotness  heat.
Of course, I could guess the result of the film was would be "the justice beats down the evil.". While, The circuitous story really made me afraid. Sentinel Prime betraied betrayed Optimus Prime, while Bumblebee was on the brink of dying. At the point of the crisis, Optimus Prime would appear and save the day.
I once hoped to see the aliens from other planets. I believe there are some other living beings live in the universe. God bless us, they will never fight us.
I love Bumblebee the most. He is so cool! The American army and their Tomahawk cruise missiles are very great, too.
I liked this film. What about you? When I was on the way home after the film (was finished-I don't know if this is needed)not needed] , I considered all the cars on the road as the transformers! Hahaha

Questions:
I am not sure of the "tense" when I talk of a film. I mean, should I use the past tense or the present tense? I was completely confused. : (

Generally, when telling a story you use a form of the past tense.  You did very well.  I am glad you liked the movie.  I would not have thought this would be a type of movie you would enjoy! I always think of you as a delicate flower! ;-)

Terasee

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