Cats in my community 1/30/2019
More and more stray cats appear in our community, people in our community have two side comments about them. some people cats said the cats are great animals to catch rats and they are cute. Some people said it will make big problem to our community's public health and will hurt the little children.
Two or more kind guys even brought food and put it on the corner of the building to feed them. But that made the people stand on the negative opinion annoyed and complaint to the property manager.
Since our city policy, urban managers need to deal with stray animals, so the manager arranged a team to catch these cats, but we do not know where will they go.
I found now in our community even all our country, more and more issues like the cats are related to the benifit of everybody. But no right system to slove the problem, we have no election, no orgnization to discuss ,debate and vote. So as the high development of our economic, the social system should also to be built and develop.
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Interesting entry! Living in Korea myself, I have noticed a large amount of stray cats everywhere. I went ahead and slightly revised some things to make it sound more natural.
Cats in my community 1/30/2019
As more and more stray cats appear in our community, people within our community have two side comments about them. Some people say the cats are great animals to catch rats and that they are cute. Some people say it will cause a big problem to our community's public health and will hurt little children.Two or more kind guys even brought food and put it on the corner of the building to feed them. But that caused more people to have a negative opinion towards the issue so they complained to the property manager.
Since our city policy, urban managers need to deal with stray animals, so the manager arranged a team to catch these cats, but we do not know where will they go.
I found now in our community and even in all of our country, more and more issues like the cats are related to the benefit of everybody. But there is no right system to solve the problem, we have no election, no organization to discuss ,debate or vote. So as the high development of our economy, a better social system should also to be built and developed.
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