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It's really cold this morning. I'm studying with English apps in my bed. x) When my mom wakes up, I'll have breakfast.
There are some places that I planned to go with my mom today. First, a health clinic center. Bank, and then a theater! Did you know that the last Wednesday of every month in Korea is called "Culture Day"? You can get a huge discount for movies, plays, museums, etc. I'll go see a movie with mom for the half price! Hehe
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1. It's really cold this morning, so I'm studying with English (on an app/ on my phone) (while laying) in my bed.--They are fine as separate sentences, but it is more natural to combine them..
2. When my mom wakes up, I'll have breakfast. - ok
3. There are some places that I am planning (to go/on going) to with my mom today.
-- "Planned" makes it seem like you will no longer be doing that.
4. First, we will go to a health clinic, then the bank, and then the theater!
-- Remember that sentences need verbs.
5. Did you know that the last Wednesday of every month in Korea is called a "Culture Day"?
-- "Called" is ok, but it seems like it is not official. It is merely what people "say" about the day.
6. On this day, you can get a huge discount on movies, plays, museums, etc.
7. I'll go see a movie with mom for half the price! Hehe
Good job, if you have any questions let me know. ^^
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