Hi, please help me by correcting my entry, thanks a lot!)
He asked if she had a name. He said that it had been a pleasure getting to know her. She asked what did he mean. He said that she wouldn't be seeing much more of him from then on because he didn't have much reason to come back there anymore, that night was his last night of drinking. So she just gave that to Travis and he let her told him he would cut him a check. He gave her a tip. She thanked him for it and said goodbye.
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Hi, please help me by correcting my entry, thanks a lot!)
He asked if she had a name. He said that it had been a pleasure getting to know her. She asked what did he mean. He said that she wouldn't be seeing much more of him from then on because he didn't have much reason to come back there anymore, that night was his last night of drinking. So she just gave that to Travis and he let her told him he would cut him a check. He gave her a tip. She thanked him for it and said goodbye.___
He asked if she had a name, and said that it had been a pleasure getting to know her. She asked him what he meant. He didn’t answer, but said that she wouldn't be seeing much more of him from then on because he didn't have much reason to come back there anymore since that night was his last night of drinking. He gave her a tip. She thanked him for it and said goodbye.
[So she just gave that to Travis and he let her told him he would cut
him a check.] = unclear what you’re trying to say. Otherwise, your essay is
very good. Most corrections were made to make the words flow easier.
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Hi, please help me by correcting my entry, thanks a lot!)
He asked if she had a name. He said that it had been a pleasure getting to knowing her. She asked what did he meant. He said that she wouldn't be seeing much more of him from then on because he didn't have much any reason to come back there anymore. that night It was his last night of drinking. So she just gave that to Travis and he let her told him he would cut him a check. He gave her a tip. She thanked him for it and said goodbye.Hi, I'm confused with what you are trying to say in the sentence highlighted in orange. So who's Travis?
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