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About my daily routine #1 28 Jan 11:57 pm So today was a little better than a regular ordinary day. I could spend some time cycling in the morning, which is a healthy thing to do. I hope I'd play some basketball in another day morning. After that, I had to commute to work in a really unpleasant hot day. Every day I feel like boiling while walking through the streets. Besides that, I was able to start some technical courses that I've been postponing for a long time. I feel like it was a very productive day. Unfortunately, lunch wasn't the best, even though it was pretty expensive… Also, I've started Yugioh GX tag force in my PSP, I feel like I'm back to 2007. I really like Yugioh but I'm not a big of card games in general though. Hope I'd have enough time to play it every day.

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About my daily routine #1

28 Jan 11:57 pm

Muito bem feito. Amarelo=corrigir erros / azul=melhorar o estilo

So* today was a little better than a regular ordinary day. I could (or "I managed to...") spend some time cycling in the morning, which is a healthy thing to do. I decided to** play some basketball in another day morning. After that, I had to commute to work on a really unpleasant hot day. Every day I feel like I'm boiling while walking through the streets. Besides that, I was able to start some technical courses that I've been postponing for a long time. I feel like it was a very productive day. Unfortunately, lunch wasn't the best, even though it was pretty expensive…
Also, I've started Yugioh GX tag force in my PSP. I feel like I'm back to 2007***. I really like Yugioh but I'm not a big fan of card games in general though****. I hope I have enough time to play it every day.


*=Esta maneira de começar uma frase com "So..." é muito informal e há pessoas que acham-no chato mas não é errado neste contexto

**=I'm not sure exactly what tense you were trying to use here. It didn't sound right as it was but I couldn't decide exactly how to fix it.

***=This would be more natural as either "I feel like I've gone back to 2007" or "I feel like I'm back in 2007" 

****De forma geral não é preciso nunca utilizar "but" e "though" na mesma frase porque ambos tem mais ou menos o mesmo efeito no significado da frase. Sem o "but", terias d fazer duas frases separadas "I really like Yugioh. I'm not a bit gan of card games in general though". É mais natural com o "but" e sem o "though".

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