The first sentence was a bit "too formal", you could've said "I'm Hosam Ahmed", simple... the second sentence there were spelling and grammatical issues, here are the points... I want "leran">the first two words are perfect, but the third should've took the infinitive for in English a verb proceeding another ALWAYS TAKES THE INFINITIVE FORM. So now your sentence should look like this= I want [to] learn English. The spelling of "Learn" is L.E.A.R.N. The second part of that sentence you said "for my life my job" grammatically this is incorrect, simply because you forgot the word "and". So insert "and" between 'my life' 'my job' it should be "for my life [and] my job" *grammar note: you can put a comma after "life" and it'll be: "for my life, and my job" but, you don't really need to *English learning tips: read a lot of books in English to get familar and spelling better along with grammar, and then watch lots of movies with subtitles on in English so you can see how the language works as well as see GOOD LUCK!