There was a time...
There was a time in my life I used to be upset because of almost everything. This time has come to an end. Nowadays, I decide to keep in my life only things and people who really contributes and helps me to be a better person. No time to waste. Is it maturing or selfishness? I think it totally depends on your point of view!
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There was a time...
There was a time in my life when I used to get upset about almost everything. This time has come to an end. Nowadays, I have decided to keep in my life only things and people who really contribute and help me to be a better person. No time to waste. Is it me maturing or selfishness? I think it totally depends on your point of view!Hey man, nice work! Your original version was pretty accurate. The things that I changed in yellow make it sound more like how a native
speaker would say things imo(in my opinion)...By the way, "people who contribute" is like saying "they contribute" 3rd person plural, so no S on the end.
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There was a time...
There was a time in my life I used to be upset because of almost everything. This time has come to an end. Nowadays, I decide to keep in my life only things and people who really contributes and helps me to be a better person. No time to waste. Is it maturing or selfishness? I think it totally depends on your point of view!There was a time in my life when I used to be upset about almost everything. I decide to keep in my life live a life that is sourrounded by only things and people who really contributes and helps me to be a better person.
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There was a time...
There was a time in my life I used to get upset over almost everything. That time has come to an end. Nowadays, I decide to keep in my life only those things and people who really contribute and help me to be a better person. No time to waste. Is it maturing or selfishness? I think that that totally depends on your point of view!Very well written!
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