Weather
Weather is always the one of most noticeable thing of us everyday. It helps to break the ice when we see new people. It's the first thing that you have to be concern with when you go away, go for work outside, etc... Weather also influence your feeling in all day.
I have spent baking hot days or chilly winters in Vietnam. Some places are drought every year, meanwhile others stand torrential rains.
In a tropical country as Vietnam, there are always days drizzling in Spring when we feel blue and dirty all the way.
Every cloud has a silver lining, the severe weather condition bring us some interesting idioms such as: storm in a tea cup, chase the rainbows or head in the clouds.
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Weather
Weather is always the one of the most noticeable things we talk about of us everyday. It helps to break the ice, when we see meet new people. It's the first thing that you have to be concerned with about when you go away, go for or have to work outside, etc... Weather also influence’s your feeling‘s in all day.I have spent baking extremely hot days and or very chilly winters in Vietnam. Some places are have a drought every year, meanwhile others have to withstand torrential rains.
In a tropical country as like Vietnam, there are always days drizzling in Spring days when we feel blue and dirty all the way over.
Every cloud has a silver lining, the severe weather condition brings us some interesting idioms such as: storm in a tea cup, chase the rainbows, or head in the clouds.
Hope this helps.
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The Weather
The weather is always the one of most noticeable things of for us everyday. It helps to break the ice when we see new people. It's the first thing that you have to be concerned with when you go away, go for to work outside, etc... The weather also influences your feeling in during all the day.I have spent baking hot days or chilly winters in Vietnam. Some places are have droughts every year, meanwhile others stand have torrential rains.
In a tropical country such as Vietnam, there are always days drizzling in Spring when we feel blue and get all dirty all the way.
However, every cloud has a silver lining, the severe weather conditions bring us some interesting idioms such as: a storm in a tea cup, chase the rainbows or head in the clouds.
This is really good, I especially like how you use idiomatic language. Your use of prepositions and articles however is weak and could do with some work
Good luck
Lucy
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