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English class task : talking about my favourite children's movie I'm going to talk about one of my favorite children's movies . It's toy story. Well, I will be honest, I didn't want to talk about this movie, but when we had to choose one, one of my classmates chose first the movie I wanted to talk about,Shrek, so I had to choose another one quickly and the first one that came to my mind was Toy Story. Actually, I didn't remember almost anything about the movie, because I watched it when I was so child, I think when I was 5 or 6 years old, I remember that I watched it on videocassette , yes those old and big videocassettes, with my brothers who were also children, but a little bigger. I'm going to talk a little about the movie, the main characters are Andy, who is a boy who is 6 years old, well the movie starts when they were celebrating their 7 year birthday, woody who is a cowboy or sheriff toy, I'm not sure, and buz lightyear who is an astronaut or something like a space warrior. One of the scenes that I remember a lot when I watched it for the first time is the first scene, when the soldier toys had to investigate what were the new gifts for Andy, I remember that I was excited because the soldier toys were one of my favorite toys. another scene that I also remember is when woody and buzz had to reach andy's car, because he was moving and it was the time buzz could fly whit the help of a rocket and said his most known phrase: to infinity and beyond¡¡

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"I will be honest, I didn't want to talk about this movie, but when we had to choose one, one of my classmates chose first the movie I wanted to talk about first, Shrek."


Comment: Adverbs ("first") in English cannot come between a verb ("choose") and its objects ("the movie I wanted to talk about").

* Some other examples to demonstrate this: "he plays well basketball well", "she sung nervously the song nervously"


"I'm going to talk a little about the movie a little. The main characters are Andy, who is a boy who is 6 years old. Well the movie starts when they were celebrating their 7th (seventh) year birthday, Woody who is a cowboy or sheriff toy, I'm not sure, and Buzz Lightyear who is an astronaut or something like a space warrior."


"One of the scenes that I remember a lot when I watched it for the first time is the first scene, when the soldier toys had to investigate what were the new gifts for Andy were, I remember that..."

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