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My Favourite Movie! I need your corrections please. Hi Tom, Today, I watched a very exciting movie named Bird Box stared by Sandra Bulluk. imagine a strange thing (like invisible monster or diseases) attack the country and it can hunt you through your eyes. So, you to stay blind or closing your eyes all the time. What shall you do to get your food and to survive. I would to see this movie because it's really great. See you soon.

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My Favourite Movie! I need your corrections please.

Hi Tom,

Today, I watched a very exciting movie named Bird Box starring Sandra Bullock.
Imagine a strange thing (like an invisible monster or a diseases) attacks the country and it can hunt you through your eyes. So, you to stay get blind or you have to closeing your eyes all the time ( So, whether you have to keep your eyes closed all the time or get blind). What would you do to get your food and to survive?

I would like to see this movie again because it's really great.

See you soon.

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My Favourite Movie!

I need your corrections please.


Hi Tom,

Today, I watched a very exciting movie called 'Bird Box' starring Sandra Bullock.
Imagine a strange thing (invisible monsters or diseases)that attack your country and can hunt you through your eyes. So, to stay safe you must stay blind or keep your eyes closed all the time. What would you do to get your food and to survive?

I would recommend that you see this movie because it is really good!

See you soon.


Good piece of writing. I've never heard of this movie, it sounds interesting though!

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Hi Tom! Today, I watched a very exciting movie named called Bird Box stared starred by Sandra Bulluk. Imagine a strange thing (like an invisible monster or diseases) attack the country and it can hunt you through your eyes. So, you have to stay blind or closing close your eyes at all times all the time. What shall would you do to get your food and to survive? I would to see this movie (again?) because it's really great. See you soon!

Bird Box is a REALLY good movie!!!

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