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CATATUMBO LIGHTNING There is a place on earth where a constant thunderstorm occurs, producing around 280 bolts per hour, which enlighten the sky and whose blaze can be seen for up to 400 km away, and for a long time served as a lighthouse to navigators. This natural phenomenon can last 10 hours per day, which means that in one night thousands of lightning can be seen. Reaching its biggest lightning production at the peak of the wet season, when one can get to witness an average of 28 lightning flashes per minute. This natural phenomenon, that won its place in the Guinness Book of World Records, takes place in Lake Maracaibo, in Venezuela. Contributing to its beauty, the presence of varying amounts of dust particles and water vapor in the atmosphere, make the flashes appear to be of a variety of colors. Red, orange, blue and purple flashes paint the night sky at the same time, displaying an utterly spectacular view. Since thunderbolts are a source of ozone, the 'Catatumbo lightning' is thought to be the largest producer of ozone in the world. The exact cause of this phenomenon is still unknown, but some experts think it happens due to the combination of a unique topography of the region, closed wind circulation, and heat.

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CATATUMBO LIGHTNING

There is a place on earth where a constant thunderstorm occurs, producing around 280 bolts per hour, which enlighten illuminate the sky and whose blaze flashes can be seen for up to 400 km away, and for a . These bolts long long time served as a lighthouse lighthouses to navigators. This natural phenomenon can last up to 10 hours per day, which means that in one night, thousands of lightning bolts can be seen. Reaching its biggest lightning production  Lightning strikes most often at the peak of the wet season, when one can get to witness an average of 28 lightning flashes per minute.

This natural phenomenon, that won its place in the Guinness Book of World Records, takes place in Lake Maracaibo, in Venezuela.

Contributing to its beauty, the presence of varying amounts of dust particles and water vapor in the atmosphere, make the flashes appear to be of  in a variety of colors. Red, orange, blue, and purple flashes paint the night sky at the same time, displaying an utterly spectacular view.

Since thunderbolts are a source of ozone, the 'Catatumbo lightning' is thought to be the largest producer of ozone in the world. The exact cause of this phenomenon is still unknown, but some experts think it happens due to the combination of a the unique topography of the region, closed wind circulation, and heat.


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CATATUMBO LIGHTNING

There is a place on earth where a constant thunderstorm occurs, producing around 280 bolts per hour, which enlighten the sky and whose blaze can be seen for up to 400 km away, and for a long time served as a lighthouse to navigators. This natural phenomenon can last 10 hours per day, which means that in one night thousands of lightning flashes of lightning/ lightning strikes / can be seen. Reaching its biggest lightning production at the peak of the wet season, when one can get to witness an average of 28 lightning flashes per minute. Suggest: The phenomenon reaches its peak at the height of the wet season, when... 

This natural phenomenon, that won its place in the Guinness Book of World Records, takes place in Lake Maracaibo, in Venezuela.

Contributing to its beauty, the presence of varying amounts of dust particles and water vapor in the atmosphere, make the flashes appear to be of a variety of colors. Red, orange, blue and purple flashes paint the night sky at the same time, displaying an utterly spectacular view.

Since thunderbolts are a source of ozone, the 'Catatumbo lightning' is thought to be the largest producer of ozone in the world. The exact cause of this phenomenon is still unknown, but some experts think it happens due to the combination of a unique topography of the region, closed wind circulation, and heat.


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