-5 degrees Fahrenheit At midnight, winter is outside my window and outside my door. I am eating an apple and dreaming about summer. I would like to open my window and smell the scents of summer and th

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-5 degrees Fahrenheit At midnight, winter is outside my window and outside my door. I am eating an apple and dreaming about summer. I would like to open my window and smell the scents of summer and the chirping of night birds, but my dreams come crashing into reality when I see -5 F Please fix my grammar mistakes

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-5 degrees Fahrenheit

At midnight, winter is outside my window and outside my door. I am eating an apple and dreaming about summer. I would like to open my window and smell the scents of summer and the chirping of night birds but my dreams come crashing into reality when I see -5 F
Please fix my grammar mistakes

I love your writing. It's very poetic.

-5 degrees Fahrenheit

At midnight, winter is outside my window and outside my door. I am eating an apple and dreaming about summer. I would like to open my window and embrace the scents of summer and the chirping of night birds, but my dreams come crashing into reality when I see -5 F

Please fix my grammar mistakes

I agree with Sue on the corrections and how your writing is poetic.

Great job!

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