A warm winter
Maybe because the climate change, the weather in Taiwan is very hot in summer and very cold in winter, sometimes the temperature is below 10 Celsius in winter in HsinChu city where I live in. But this year is a warm winter, I think the temperature today at night is the lowest temperature in this winter, but it's 18 Celsius. Even it is a little cold for a lot of people, but for me it is a suitable temperature, I still wear shorts today.
But every time when I say this is a warm winter, the weather will start changing to colder and colder.
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A Warm Winter
Perhaps because of climate change, the weather is becoming more and more extreme - the winters are becoming colder; and the summers are becoming hotter. For example, where I live in Xinzhu city, it can sometimes get below 10 degrees in the winter. This year, however, winter has been much warmer than usual. Tonight the lowest temperature was 18 degrees! While that's a bit cold for some people, I think it's alright, I still wore shorts today!
Every time I say the weather is warmer than usual, it always suddenly goes cold again.
Comments:
-你已經寫得很好了，不錯！
-我看了一下你寫的短文，然後用自己的理解幫你重新寫了一個小短文。僅供參考。
-標題裡面的每一個詞的每一個字皆要大寫
-Even是“甚至“的意思；Even if是”即使“的意思；While是”雖然“的意思
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