I living live in a city very nice city called that is Salvador, in the state of Bahia, in Brazil. The weather is tropical with a beatiful sun in more of the days. (The correct expression is: most of the time) I'd like to meet know other cities in my state too/as well also, (it isn't correct to use "also" at the end, you must use it after the subject at most of the time) then in other states, then other countries.

I live in a very nice city called Salvador, in the state of Bahia, Brazil. The weather is tropical, with most days being sunny. I'd like to go to other cities in my state as well/too, then to other states, and finally, other countries.

Cool! Keep practicing! 
Em português falamos "conhecer cidades", em inglês é "go to cities", até professores inexperientes erram a expressão. Sucesso!