Correct me please

I am very proud of all of you and your videos! I'm happy for you performing in the play. If you want a new challenge....I think it will must should be one challenge per week? What do you think? Thank you very much my friends for your texts on my birthday. I hope you had fun. The day of my thirty five years was finished My 35th birthday is over .... This year, I will speak English fluently and I will change my life because I need this! Twenty nineteen, my year by(?) the whales... And you, what will be your goal for this years???
See you soon, and thanks
Bye bye

I am very proud of all of you and your videos! I'm happy you're playing the play. If you know a new challenge....I think it must be one challenge per week? What do you think? Thank you very much my friends for your texts for my birthday, I hope you had fun. My thirty fifth birthday was finished.... This year, I will speak English fluently and I will change my life because I need this! Twenty nineteen, my year near the whales (Not sure what you mean. Not an expression I've heard of personally)... And you, what will be your goal for this years??? See you soon, also thanks Bye bye