Taipei fine art museum
The winter vacation finally coming.I went to museum,having a relaxing trip.I had a deep impression with the work "return" from artist hsiao sheng-chien.It's a work imitate the warble of the bird by using motor with nail stick on the side, motor runing and the nail beat the canvas. Above the canvas is a horn,so the nail beat the cylindrical canvas,and the air in the cylindrical canvas go to the horn,then the horn horn. How long the cylindrical is decide how loud the horn sound is.
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Taipei Fine Art Museum
The winter vacation finally came. I went to the museum and I had a very relaxing trip. (Or you could say: and I had a very relaxing timeI had a deep impression of the work "Return," from the artist Hsiao Sheng-Chien. It's a piece of work that imitate’s the warble of the bird, using a motor with a nail stick on the side. When the motor is running and the nail beats the canvas. Above the canvas is a horn. where The nail beats the cylindrical canvas, and the air in the cylindrical canvas goes to the horn. then the horn horn. How long The length of the cylindrical is, decide canvas determines how loud the horn sounds.
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