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Could you correct my entry, please) According to popular belief, the eve of Epiphany, that is, the evening of January 18, is the famous Epiphany evening, the time of contact with the netherworld, the last day of Christmas divination. So us girls gathered to know, with the help of melted wax what the coming year is preparing for us. With the help of beans, we learned about family matters, work and friendship. Coffee beans told us the name of our futures grooms. There was also fortune telling on the coffee grounds and delicious dumplings with a dozen different fillings that predicted our future: cottage cheese - gentle and kind husband, meat - breadwinner-husband, potatoes - funny husband, peppercorn - new friend, dill - good health , a nut is a secret admirer, a thread is a long road, raisins are adventures in love, raspberries are a surprise, bay leaves predict fame. Yes, there were those who got an empty dumpling, which means that the girl will not marry this year. It's ok, because she is still studying in 10th grade! In villages it was very popular to use a rooster to predict fate. We used a real hen! We express endless words of gratitude to cool girls, Ann an Jane, for their help in preparing our gathering. With these girls we want to put on something new, interesting and crazy

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Could you correct my entry, please)

According to popular belief, the eve of Epiphany, that is, the evening of January 18, is the famous Epiphany evening, the time of contact with the netherworld, the last day of Christmas divination.
So us girls gathered to know, with the help of melted wax what the coming year is preparing for us / has in store for us. With the help of beans, we learned about family matters, work and friendships. Coffee beans told/foretold us the names of our future grooms.
There was also fortune telling on the coffee grounds and delicious dumplings with a dozen different fillings that predicted our future: a cottage cheese filling means your husband would be gentle and kind, meat means a breadwinner-husband, potatoes -  a funny husband, peppercorn - a new friend and dill - good health, a nut is a secret admirer, a thread is a long road, raisins are adventures in love, raspberries are a surprise and bay leaves predict fame. (you might want to look for synonyms of "mean, foretell, predict, foresee, be destined, etc")
Yes, there were those who got an empty dumpling, which means that the girl will not marry this year. It's ok, because the ones who got such a dumpling are still studying in 10th grade! / are still in 10th  grade!
There used to be a tradition among the commonfolk in russian villages  of using a rooster to predict fate. We used a real hen!
We express endless words of gratitude to cool girls, Ann and Jane, for their help in preparing our gathering. With these girls we want to put on something new, interesting and crazy


"in villages" sounds a bit weird, because prior to that you never talked about a location. It sounds like "In all villages" or "In villages in general."


What do you mean by "put on something new..."?

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