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The Holiday I saw the movie “THE HOLIDAY “ tonight. Every couples are so lovely in this movie especially Graham and Amanda. The relationship between Graham and Amanda just like fire. They started in a small tinder then becomes the blaze. I really felt the heartbeat and the motion between them. And Iris can see clearly her ex-boyfriend finally that really made me happy. She had thrown out the past and became a new life. We should always believe that there are not any things can’t pass!

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The Holiday

I saw the movie “THE HOLIDAY  The Holiday“ tonight. Every All the couples are so lovely in this movie, especially Graham and Amanda.
The relationship between Graham and Amanda is just like fire. They started in a small tinder off chatting on Tinder then becomes the blaze things got hot.
I really felt their heartbeat and the motionvement between them.
AndAlso, when Iris can see clearly could finally see her ex-boyfriend, that really made me happy. She had thrown out the past and became started a new life.
We should always believe that there are not any things can’t pass we can do anything!


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You write really well!!! I wish i could find a date like this hahaha

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Very nice movie.
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which means "tinder" and "lris"?

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