Please help me to edit my first english essay:
[When I am getting old]
When I am getting old
When I am getting old
I want to be melting ice in Spring
Wake a green of withered grassplot up
With my rich and pure heart.
When I am getting old
I want to be a lotus in pond in Summer
Although I don't say anything,
I'm full of elegance and interest.
When I am getting old
I want to be grain gained in Autumn
Plump and golden
Disperse a little fragrance.
When I am getting old
I want to be a charcoal in Winter
Although not blazing
it can make warm days.
Written by Bruce
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Please help me to edit my first english essay: [When I am getting old]
When I am getting oldWhen I am getting old
I want to be melting ice in spring
Awaken a green of withered grass
With my rich and pure heart.
When I am getting old
I want to be a lotus in a pond in summer
Although I don't say anything
I am full of elegance and interest.
When I am getting old
I want to be grain, ripe in autumn
Plump and golden
Dispersing a little fragrance.
When I am getting old
I want to be a coal in winter
Although not blazing
I can make warm days.
Written by Bruce
🐈🐈
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When I am getting old, when I am getting old, I want to be melting ice in Spring Wake, a green of withered grassplot up, with my rich and pure heart. When I am getting old I want to be a lotus in pond in Summer; although I don't say anything, I'm full of elegance and interest. When I am getting old I want to be grain gained in Autumn Plump and golden Disperse a little fragrance. When I am getting old I want to be a charcoal in Winter; although not blazing it can make warm days. Written by Bruce 🐈🐈
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