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Buy a Bicycle I am thinking about buying a bicycle because when I ride on a bike I feel happy, more healthy and It's very good to feel the air on my face. I live near in a park and there I can practice this. But I don't know if it's a good idea, because I don't know if I will go ride on a bike on this park usually and I have to save the bike on my apartment. Maybe can be better rent a bicycle once in a while. What do you think about? I am from Brazil and I am learning English. I will glad with you could correct my sentence.

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Buying a Bicycle

I am thinking about buying a bicycle because when I ride on a bike I feel happy, more and healthy. and and It's very good to I like to feel the air wind on my face. I live near in a park and there where I can practice this. However, I don't know if it's a good idea to buy a bicycle because I don't know if I will go ride on a bike on this in the park usually often and I have will have to save keep the bike on in my apartment. Maybe can be it is better to rent a bicycle once in a while.
What do you think about?

I am from Brazil and I am learning English. I will glad with if you could correct my sentences.



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Buy a Bicycle

I am thinking about buying a bicycle because when I ride on a bike I feel happy, more healthy and It's very/so good to feel the wind on my face. I live near in a park and I can ride my bike there. But I don't know if it's a good idea, because I don't know if I will actually be riding my bike  (in the park) or have it stay in my apartment. Maybe it is better to rent a bicycle once in a while.
What do you think about this?



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Buy a Bicycle

I am thinking about buying a bicycle because when I ride a bike I feel happy, healthier and It's very good to feel the air on my face. I live near in a park and there I can practice biking. But I don't know if it's a good idea, because I don't know if I will actually ride the bike on that park. Usually I have to keep the bike on my apartment. Maybe it can be better to rent a bicycle once in a while.
What do you think about it?

I am from Brazil and I am learning English. I will be glad if you could correct my sentence.

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