Elephant man

Yesterday I read a story about an elephant man. I always thought that this story was not from real life, I thought that it had come from the imagination of the writer. When I finished the book, I decided to search for more information about this book on the Internet. I was surprised when I found out that the main character was not a fictional character but a real person and quite famous in England. This man had had a hard life since from early childhood. He had a terrible illness which made his body ugly. Many bad and stupid people laughed at him because of his illness, but by the will of God, he found a lot of good and kind people who made the last years of his life happy and safety. The name of this man was Joseph Merrick. He was a man with a vulnerable, and at the same time, strong heart, as he was able to find beauty in many simple things in his difficult life.  I really liked this story, it made me think about many things that we often forget.

Yesterday I read story about an elephant man. I always thought that this story was not from real life, I thought that it is a imagination of the writer. When I finished with book, I decided to search more information about this book on the Internet. I was surprised when I knew that the main character was not a fictional character but a real person and quite famous in England. This man had a hard life since from early childhood. He had a terrible ill which makes his body ugly. Many bad and stupid people laught at him because of his illnes, but by will of God he found a lot of good and kind people who makes last ages of his life happy and safety. The name of this man was Joseph Merrick. He was a man with a vulnerable and at the same time strong heart, as he was able to find the beautiful in many simple things in his difficult life I really liked this story. it makes think about many things, that we often forgot.

Yesterday I read a story about the elephant man. I always thought this story was not real life and that it only existed in the mind of the writer. After I finished the book, I decided to do some research on the internet, and I was surprised to find out that the main character was not fictional, but a real person and quite famous in England. He had a hard life from the start of his childhood because he had a terrible illness that made his body ugly, and he was laughed at by cruel and ignorant people. By the will of God , he found good and kind people who made the last years of his life happy and safe. The man's name was Joseph Merrick. He was a man with both a vulnerable and a strong heart and was thus able to find beauty in simple things inspite of his difficult life. I really liked this story, and it made me think of many things that are often not considered.

Just an aside, there is a very good movie starring John Hurt called "The Elephant Man". It is worth watching. It's probably on Netflix.

Elephant Man

Yesterday I read a story about an Elephant Man. I always thought that this story was fictional and that the story was from the imagination of the author. However, when I finished reading the book, I decided to search for more information on the book on the Internet.

I was surprised when I discovered that the main character was not a fictional character but a real person and he was actually quite famous in England. This man had had a hard life since early childhood because he had a terrible illness that made his body ugly.

Many bad and stupid people laughed at him because of his illness, but by the will of God, he met a lot of good and kind people who made the last stages of his life happy and safe. The name of this man was Joseph Merrick. He was a man who was vulnerable but at the same time had a strong heart as he was able to find the beauty in many simple things that were difficult in his life.

In fact, I really like the story. It made me think about many things that we often forget.

Hello Sultan, great piece of writing, just a few mistakes that would improve through reading. I have also watched documentaries about the Elephant Man, it is a very interesting story! 

Take care. Andrea :-)

Elephant man

Yesterday I read story about an elephant man. I always thought that this story was not from real life, I thought that it is a imagination of the writer. When I finished with book, I decided to search more information about this book on the Internet. I was surprised when I knew that the main character was not a fictional character but a real person and quite famous in England. This man had a hard life since from early childhood. He had a terrible ill which makes his body ugly. Many bad and stupid people laught at him because of his illnes, but by will of God he found a lot of good and kind people who makes last ages of his life happy and safety. The name of this man was Joseph Merrick. He was a man with a vulnerable and at the same time strong heart, as he was able to find the beautiful in many simple things in his difficult life I really liked this story. it makes think about many things, that we often forgot.

1. is a - 'an imagination' Always use 'an' on words that start with vowels (a,e,i,o,u).

2. I finished with book - 'I was finished with the book' You're talking about the past tense right? Then use 'was' not the present.

3. search more - 'search for more'

4. knew - 'learned' Again, you're talking about the past, if you knew this then you wouldn't say so.

5. since from - 'since his'

6. ill - 'illness' Ill is the adjective, if he had something it would be the the noun, illness; the state of being ill.

7. makes - 'made' Again, you need to stay with the past tense here.

8. ugly - I know what you mean here, but if we're being hyperspecific, I would use a different word. Perhaps 'deformed' or 'unsightly'. Because, in the end, who's to say what ugly really is?

9. laught - 'laughed' simple spelling error

10. illnes - 'illness' again, simple spelling error

11. but by will of God - I would need to see the prompt you're writing about, but did it say in the reading that it was by the will of God? That aside, if it WAS by the will of God,  it should be 'by the will of God'.

12. makes last ages - 'made the last years'

13. safety - 'safe'

14. 'a vulnerable' - 'a vulnerability' Vulnerable is the adjective, vulnerability is the noun, the thing he has/had.

15. strong heart - 'a strong heart'

16. beautiful - 'the beauty' Beautiful is, again, the adjective. If he found something, it would be the noun 'beauty'.

17. life I really - You should put a period between 'life' and 'I'. It becomes a run on sentence otherwise.

18. it - 'It' Always capitalize a the beginning of a sentence