Hi, please help me by correcting my entry, thanks a lot!)
1. It has something to do with the girl he came here with.
2. It has something to do with the letter which he wrote to me.
3. It has nothing to do with those people more or less.
4. It has nothing to do with you /me more or less.
Those keys left a little old lady.(A little old lady left those keys). Her best friend would pick them up and come to look in on her. Since then I never saw her. She was very old. I guesse she just died or something. The girl asked me what about another keys, she chose one. I said these keys belonged to a young man, he made plans and had dreams of running every marathon in this country starting in New York. He was going to write a journal about his expiriences and in the end he ended up running a kafe. Than the keys were given to a Russian girl who very loved collecting keys and enjoyed watching sunsets. But she loved sunsets more than keys and ended up one day she dissapeared in one of them.
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Hi, please help me by correcting my entry, thanks a lot!)
1. It has something to do with the girl he came here with.2. It has something to do with the letter which he wrote to me.
3. It, more or less, has nothing to do with those people more or less.
4. It, more or less, has nothing to do with you/me more or less.
Those keys left a little old lady.(A little old lady left those keys) *corresct*. Her best friend would pick them up and come to look in check up on her. Since then, I never saw her. She was very old. I guesse she just died or something. The girl asked me what about another the other keys, and she chose one a new key. I said told her these keys belonged to a young man, and that he made plans to and had dreams of running every marathon in this country starting in New York. He was going to write a journal about his experiences, and but in the end he ended up running a kcafe. Thaen the keys were given to a Russian girl who very really loved collecting keys and enjoyed watching sunsets. But she loved sunsets more than keys, and ended up one day she ended up dissapeared disappearing into a sunset in one of them.
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