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My thoughs Could you correct my mistakes please? Thank you! About surrounding It' s very important to be surrounded by positive and ambitious people as much as not being surrounded by those who inhibit to maintain your purposeful mood. Sometimes you even don't pay attention how pessimistic outlook and claims of every day life can influence you badly. Everyone had friends who like claiming or saying bad words about outside reality. These people don't want to change themselves. They like to claim because it goes better for them. They become empty of their mud and feel happy and fresh. But you feel upset and confused. After that connection you need to be recharged. But when you communicate with the right people you feel inspired and full of power. It moves you to act, to create, to learn smth new. That's why is so important to be with the right people.

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My thoughs

Could you correct my mistakes please?

Thank you!

About surrounding (yourself with the right people)

It' s very important to be surrounded by positive and ambitious people as much as not being surrounded by those who inhibit you from maintaining your productive/good mood. Sometimes you even don't pay attention to how a pessimistic outlook and claims(perhaps you meant "complaints"?) of every day life can influence you badly.
Everyone had(has? no sure about the use of past tense here) friends who like claiming(complaints) or making negative comments about the outside reality(maybe the terms "the big picture" or "the outside world" would fit better). These people don't want to change themselves. They like to claim(complain) because it goes better for them(because it makes them feel empowered). They become empty of their mud(They dump/relieve their stress) and feel happy and fresh(maybe "refreshed"?). But you feel upset and confused. After that connection(After that kind of experience/encounter) you need to be recharged.
But when you communicate with the right people you feel inspired and full of power. It moves you to act, to create, to learn smth new.
That's why it is so important to be with the right people.

I've tried to correct your entry so it sounds more natural and added a few missing articles and prepositions.
I hope this helps you and that you learn some new expressions from my correction :D

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