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Hello. My name is Dasha. I going to move to the US. And first that I should do when I will come there find a work. My skills might are enough for looking for a good job because I like to meet new people. But I don't know the English language well. So I found out about a job housekeeper which doesn't require special skills and allow me learning English. The work implies cleaning rooms by the vacuum cleaner, washing bathroom and a lot of other things. It is hard work because you have to work with chemical things and bring big weigh. It scares me because from such work may arise a health problem. Perhaps do you know another work for the start in learning the language?
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Hello, my name is Dasha. I'm going to move to the US. The first thing that I will do when I come there is find work. My skills are enough for a good job, because I like to meet new people. But I don't know the English language well. So I found out about a job to work as a housekeeper, which doesn't require special skills and will allow me to learn English. The work implies cleaning rooms by the vacuuming, washing the bathroom, and a lot of other things. It is hard work because you have to work with chemicals, and carry big weights. It scares me because from such work may arise health problems. Do you know any other jobs for people learning English?
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Hello. My name is Dasha. I going to move to the US. And finding a job there is the fist thing I need to do . I am not good at English although I like to meet new people. And my skill may not enough to look for a good job. Hence working as a job housekeeper is suitbbale for me as it doesn't require special skills and allow me to learn English too. The work implies cleaning rooms with the vacuum cleaner, washing bathroom and a lot of other things. It is hard work because you have to work with chemical things and doing the heavy lift. It scares me because such work may casue a health problem. Perhaps you may know another work for the beginning of learning a language?
I am not a native speaker, I just try to amend which based on my thouht, hope you willl not mind.
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