A place I visited in my childhood (149 words)
My father often took me the pool in summer when I was children.
I sometimes went to pools in a neighbourhood with my father.
My favorite pool wasn’t regular. It generates the wave, and its water is from the sea.
When the big wave came to us, we jumped up, and it was entertaining. However, nobody wasn’t surfing because there were too much crowded.
Now that think about it, there was a beach in the neighbourhood where I live, but the beach wasn’t beautiful and clean. If I wanted to go to the beautiful beach, it took too much time to get there at that time.
So, we could easily enjoy the wave pool like the sea.
There isn’t the beautiful beach near where I live in now. When my child will be a bit older, I want to take him to the beautiful beach or the wave pool.
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A place I visited in my childhood (149 words)
My father often took me to the pool in the summer when I was a child.I sometimes went to pools in a neighbourhood with my father.
My favorite pool wasn’t normal. It generates the wave, and its water is from the sea.
When the big wave came to us, we jumped up, and it was entertaining. However, nobody was surfing because there it was too crowded.
Now that I think about it, there was a beach in the neighbourhood where I live, but the beach wasn’t beautiful and clean. If I wanted to go to the beautiful beach, it took too much time to get there.
So, we could easily enjoy the wave pool like the sea.
There isn’t a beautiful beach near where I live now. When my child is a bit older, I want to take him to the beautiful beach or the wave pool.
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A place I visited in my childhood (149 words)
My father often took me the pool in summer when I was children.I sometimes went to pools in a neighbourhood with my father.
My favorite pool wasn’t regular. It generates the wave, and its water is from the sea.
When the big wave came to us, we jumped up, and it was entertaining. However, nobody wasn’t surfing because there were too much crowded.
Now that think about it, there was a beach in the neighbourhood where I live, but the beach wasn’t beautiful and clean. If I wanted to go to the beautiful beach, it took too much time to get there at that time.
So, we could easily enjoy the wave pool like the sea.
There isn’t the beautiful beach near where I live in now. When my child will be a bit older, I want to take him to the beautiful beach or the wave pool.
Correction:
My father often took me to the pool in summer when I was a child. I sometimes went to neighbourhood pools with him. My favourite pool was unusual. It contained sea water, and it generated waves. When a big wave came, we jumped up, and it was fun. However, nobody was surfing because it was too crowded. Now that I think about it, there was a beach in the neighbourhood where I lived, but it wasn't beautiful and clean. If I wanted to go to a beautiful beach, it took too long to get there, at that time. So, we could easily enjoy the wave pool, like the sea. There isn't a beautiful beach near where I live now. When my child is older, I want to take him to a beautiful beach or the wave pool.
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