ADVERTISING IN YOUNGSTER
It is often claimed that advertising campaign are too much present in our daily live, especially for young people who spend more hour in front of a screen. The two texts illustrate different aspects of the issue. While text A suggests that young people are easily influenced by advertisements, text B support the idea that this influence is not so important because their constant exposition to it.
On the one hand, the first text exposes that teenagers have a great influence in families´ purchasing, to that point they can be a key factor to acquire expensive items such as a vehicle. Taking into consideration that they do not tend to value enough money as well as the sum of money that they spend annually on spare time activities and clothes, they are a key market niche for companies. This author claims that famous people or friends make an influence on youngster. I see eye to eye with the writer, given that sometimes youngsters buy only to keep up with the Joneses.
On the other hand, text B exposes that contrary to the popular believe that the youth are more impressionable because of their continuous exposition to advertisement; it is that what precisely offers them the capability to not be impressed by adds. Additionally, all the information that is given to young help increases the probability to make an adequate choice, because the more you know the better you decide. Most of the writer´s arguments are plausible although I support the idea that despite growing watching advertisement at any moment, this industry has a clear influence among the youth.
All in all, needles to say that advertisements are related to choosing these products by teenager. However, it is disputable to what extent this is the main circumstance.
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ADVERTISING IN YOUNGSTER
It is often claimed that advertising campaigns are too much present in our daily lives, especially for young people who spend more hours in front of a screen. The two texts illustrate different aspects of the issue. While text A suggests that young people are easily influenced by advertisements, text B supports the idea that this influence is not so important because their constant exposition to it.On the one hand, the first text exposes that teenagers have a great influence in their families´ purchasing, to that point they can be a key factor to acquire expensive items such as a vehicle. Taking into consideration that they do not tend to value enough money as well as the sum of money that they spend annually on spare time activities and clothes, they are a key market niche for companies. The author claims that famous people or friends have an influence on youngster. I see eye to eye (1) with the writer, given that sometimes youngsters buy only to keep up with the Jones's.
On the other hand, text B exposes that contrary to the popular believe that the youth are more impressionable because of their continuous exposition to advertisement; it is that what precisely offers them the capability to not be impressed by adds. Additionally, all the information that is given to young help increases the probability to make an adequate choice, because the more you know the better you decide. Most of the writer´s arguments are plausible although I support the idea that despite the growing watching advertisement at any moment, this industry has a clear influence among the youth.
All in all, needles to say that advertisements are related to choosing these products by teenager. However, it is disputable to what extent this is the main circumstance.
Excellent job!!!!!
see eye to eye (1) OK.. but I am in agreement with the writer is better. "eye to eye" is very informal, not normally used in a formal writing.
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