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my love i have lost my love yesterday.my boyfriend ....when we were talking about it.i didn't cry.but my heart has broken...i never want to have a boyfriend any more..

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My love

 Yesterday I  lost   my boyfriend who was my love.  When we were talking about it,  I didn't cry,  but my heart was broken... I  never want to have a boyfriend again..

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my love

i have lost(have lost)  my love yesterday.my boyfriend ....when we were talking about it.i didn't cry.but my heart has been broken...i never  don't want to have a boyfriend any more..

 

PS:sorry to hear that my dear.just don't think about him anymore.   you know,there're many good boys,not all boys are bad.   and you should thank him,because he let you know that he is worthless and then you have a chance to make friends with other boys,and you can find the better one.   don't be sad,just let it go away. GOOD LUCK dear.  :D

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Seems I also have to post my message here also: LOVE IS A LIE! It never has existed, does not exist and will never exist. The people just get together to get more money, wealth and to fulfill their egoistic needs. Thats all. Now you and also Sally found it out by yourself. Remember the news from Changchun where the girl wanted to jump out of the window because her "boyfriend" short before the planned marriage and after 4 years of being together just married another girl? Wasn' this warning already much enough for you to realise what you so called "love" is all about? Remember that you humans are nothing more then the descendants of monkeys. If you are together with somebody its just because your body wants 性. Thats it its just to get descendants so that the human race will not die. This is all why you humans believe into love. Also because of the money. If you work alone and have to pay the rent of your flat you have not much money left but if you and another person live in that flat you still have to pay the rent just once so there is much money left for both of you because just one has to pay the rent and the other one still has his/her full amount of money to share with the other. I hope now you understood that and you will be single forever. Life is only about war, suffer and death and just now you experienced it. I hope now you go the right path instead of the wrong you walked before. 克 里 斯 蒂 安
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Don't think about anymore. He is not your true love. You will meet your Mr.right soon.
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Never lost your believe of life , Love is important to every one , every one is finding one true love ,. When it comes just cherish , no regret is OK, if the love not belong to me , just let that go and keep pursuing , we could finder better , and the past love let it be a memory in heart , This is not easy everyone knows , but it is must to be done , long or short in time . Advise a song from West life to you : Try again . When you fall down , just try again .

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