Day 13 : Writing exercise 1
I have online courses for my English. They propose writing exercises but there isn't correction... So, I thought to put them here ;) The first exercise isn't incredible but it permits me to write on basical subjects. I prefer the second exercise but it is for tomorrow !
Why do you like/don't you like shopping?
I like shopping when there are few people. For example, I don't really like shopping during the sales because there are plenty of people. Indeed, in general, people are disrespectful and they hurt you. But at the other moments, when the shops are almost empty, it's very nice. You have the time to check clothes without people disturb you. Nevertheless, it's not always possible to do shopping in these special moments.
Do you prefer supermarkets to local shops?
In general, supermarkets are less expensive than local shops. But, local shops can be better. By "better", I want say that the products like vegetables or fruit are of better quality. So, I think it depends on your budget and the quality that you want or you need for your food.
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Day 13 : Writing exercise 1
I have online courses for my English. They propose offer writing exercises but there isn't correction... So, I thought to I'd put them here ;) The first exercise isn't incredible but it permits allows me to write on trivial topics basical subjects. I prefer the second exercise but it is for tomorrow !Why do you like/don't you like shopping?
I like to shopping when there are few people. For example, I don't really like to shopping during the sales because there are plenty of people. Indeed, in general, people are disrespectful and they hurt you. But at the on other days moments, when the shops are almost empty, it's very nice. You have the time to check out clothes without people disturbing you. Nevertheless, it's not always possible to do shopping in these special moments.
Do you prefer supermarkets to local shops?
In general, supermarkets are less expensive than local shops. But, local shops can be better. By "better", I want say that the products like vegetables or fruit are of better quality. So, I think it depends on your budget and the quality that you want or you need for from your food.
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Day 13 : Writing exercise 1
I have online courses for my English. They propose OFFER writing exercises but there isn't ANY correction AVAILABLE... So, I thought to put them here ;) The first exercise isn't incredible but it permits ALLOWS me to write on basical BASIC subjects. I prefer the second exercise but it is for tomorrow !Why do you like/don't you like shopping?
I like shopping when there are few people. For example, I don't really like shopping during the sales because there are plenty A LOT of people. Indeed, in general, people are disrespectful and they hurt you. But at the other moments, when the shops are almost (TRY: NEARLY. "Almost works here but not as precise a NEARLY). empty, it's very nice. You have the time to check clothes without people disturbING you. Nevertheless, it's not always possible to do shopping SHOP DURING these special moments.
Do you prefer supermarkets to local shops?
In general, supermarkets are less expensive than local shops. But, local shops can be better. By "better", I want to say MEAN the products like vegetables or fruit are of better quality. So, I think it depends on your budget and the quality that you want or you need for your food.
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Day 13 : Writing exercise 1
I have online courses for my English. They propose writing exercises but there isn't correction... So, I thought to put them here ;) The first exercise isn't incredible but it permits me to write on basic subjects. I prefer the second exercise but it is for tomorrow !Why do you like/don't you like shopping?
I like shopping when there are few people. For example, I don't really like shopping during the sales because there are plenty of people. Indeed, in general, people are disrespectful and they hurt (I don't think hurt is the right word for this context) you. But at the other moments, when the shops are almost empty, it's very nice. You have the time to check clothes without people disturbing you. Nevertheless, it's not always possible to shop during these special moments.
Do you prefer supermarkets to local shops?
In general, supermarkets are less expensive than local shops. But, local shops can be better. By "better", I want say that the products like vegetables or fruit are of better quality. So, I think it depends on your budget and the quality that you want or you need for your food.
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Day 13 : Writing exercise 1
I have online courses for my English. They propose writing exercises but they don't correct them... So, I thought to put them here ;) The first exercise isn't incredible but it permits me to write on basic subjects. I prefer the second exercise but it is for tomorrow !Why do you like/don't you like shopping?
I like shopping when there are few people. For example, I don't really like shopping during the sales because there are too many people. Indeed, in general, people are disrespectful and they hurt you. But at other moments, when the shops are almost empty, it's very nice. You have the time to check clothes without people disturbing you. Nevertheless, it's not always possible to do shopping in these special moments.
Do you prefer supermarkets to local shops?
In general, supermarkets are less expensive than local shops. But, local shops can be better. By "better", I want to say that products like vegetables or fruit are of better quality. So, I think it depends on your budget and the quality that you want or you need for your food.
Two nice short articles with just a few corrections.
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