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This text is about a project for a bike shop. My class worked on the organisation of the workshop. and most importantly about how we can manage to store 30 bikes in that space. The missions were to define a customer’s area and another work space for our customer's colleague. When I thought about bicycle that did get me into another train of thought with a story about cycling, it was the foundation of my project. This story is from Alfred Jarry who loved cycling and think that cyclists are supermen. In this story some cyclists were involved in a race starting at Paris to Irkouste against a train with the help of the perpetual motion food an invention, this is a little white cube with all the nutritional benefits of a dinner, in the story cyclist beat the train _ that's it for the story. I had tried to recreate in a symbolically way this race. I used IPN beams to think about the train, and to take benefits of the high rooftop of the workshop. A carousel to store the finish bikes: twelve in 3 meters of diameter. The carousel also adds a dynamic feeling to this project. It brings a scenario where the costumer brings his bicycle at the entrance of the workshop and attach it at the storing spots in the beams, and take it back at the carrousel when the reparation is done.
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School project (looking for corrections)
This text is about a project for a bike shop. My class worked on the organisation of the workshop and most importantly about how we can manage to store 30 bikes in that space. The missions were to define a customer’s area and another work space for our customer's colleague. When I thought about the bicycles, I started to think about a specific cycling story that inspired my project. This story is about Alfred Jarry who loved cycling and thought that cyclists were supermen. In this story, several cyclists were involved in a race from Paris to Irkouste against a train with the help of the perpetual motion food. This invention is a little white cube with all the nutritional benefits of a dinner. In the end, the cyclist beat the train. . I had tried to recreate this race symbolically.. I used IPN beams to replicate the train, and to take benefits of the high rooftop of the workshop.Then, I used a carousel to store the finish bikes: twelve in 3 meters of diameter. The carousel also adds a dynamic feeling to this project. It creates a scenario where the customer brings his bicycle to the entrance of the workshop and attaches it at the storing spots in the beams which takes it back to the carrousel when the repairs are done.Want to progress faster?
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