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Brazil flagLuciene Oliveira
my first text hello everyone!! I live in Brazil. I'm 30 years old and love my country. I like painting frames, play guitar and play football. I've been studying English for two weeks and I'm loving it. I like learn English because it makes me more connected with the world. I love the peoples. I'm studying marketing and have a agency. I soon want to meet the United States and hope to make new friends there. I'm going to visit California, Massachusetts and New York. Does anyone have a suggestion for a travel script to share? how is my English?

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My first text

Hello everyone!!

I live in Brazil. I'm 30 years old and love my country. I like painting frames, playing guitar and playing football.
I've been studying English for two weeks and I love I'm loving it.
I like learning English because it makes me more connected with the world. I love the peoples.
I'm studying marketing and have an agency.

I soon want to go to meet the United States and hope to make new friends there. I'm going to visit California, Massachusetts and New York. Does anyone have a suggestion for an itinerary travel script to share? How is my English?
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Hello Everyone!!

I live in Brazil. I'm 30 years old and love my country. I like painting portraits/landscapes (we don't say frames, frames are what surrounds the painting usually made of wood), playing guitar and playing "soccer". I've been studying English for two weeks and I'm loving it. I like learning English because it makes me feel more connected with the world. I love American people. I'm studying marketing and own an agency. 

I soon want to visit the United States and I hope to make new friends there. I'm going to visit California, Massachusetts and New York.

Hope this helped you.

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My first text

 Hello everyone!!

I live in Brazil. I'm 30 years old and I love my country. I like painting frames, playing guitar and playing football.
I've been studying English for two weeks and I'm loving it.
I like to learn English because it makes me more connected with the world. I love people.
I'm studying marketing and have an agency.

I soon want to meet the United States and I hope to make new friends there. I'm going to visit California, Massachusetts and New York. Does anyone have a suggestion for a travel script to share? How is my English? 
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my first text

hello everyone!!

I live in Brazil. I'm 30 years old and I love my country. I like painting frames, playing guitar and playing football.
I've been studying English for two weeks and I'm loving it.
I like learning English because it makes me more connected with the world. I love the peoples I meet.
I'm studying marketing and have a agency.

I soon want to meet go to the United States soon and hope to make new friends there. I'm I'll going to visit California, Massachusetts and New York. Does anyone have a suggestion for a travel script itinerary to share? How is my English?


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