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Best holiday Hi guys, I'm trying to improve my writing skills, so I hope I'll get some corrections, not only about grammar but also about form and sentences structure. My best holiday took place last year, when I travelled to Gran Canaria with my fiancé. Gran Canaria is a volcanic island that makes part of Canary Islands and it is know as 'the miniature continent' because it offers a large variety of natural features. In fact we rented a car and we heated for random road trips around the island: in just one day of driving you can find seaside villages, sandy beaches, canyons, desert, narrow mountain streets that led you through incredible landscapes. We visited the dunas of Maspalomas and we made a camel tour through this incredible scenery, we went hiking to Roque Nublo, that is a volcanic centre. We drove without destination finding beautiful unspotted sea coves through the mountains, recheable only after hours of trekking, but completely isolated and silent. We did snorkeling and surf, and if by day we relaxed by the sea, by night we enjoyed a really vivacious nightlife. We also visited pictoresque villages such as the beautiful Puerto de Mogan, know as 'little Venice', and we walked through the capital Las Palmas and its local crowded markets. It has been my best holiday because of the variety of landscapes and sceneries we enjoyed, and the many activities we could do without spendind too much. We really had a good time, enjoying our mutual company and celebrating our love. I think we could have a better holiday just on next summer because we'll get married in June and we'll go To Maldives for our honeymoon. I can't wait for it!

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Best holiday

Hi guys, I'm trying to improve my writing skills, so I hope I'll get some corrections, not only about grammar but also about form and sentences structure.

My best (favorite would be better here) holiday took place last year, when I travelled to Gran Canaria with my fiancé. Gran Canaria is a volcanic island that makes up part of the Canary Islands and is known as 'the miniature continent' because it offers a large variety of natural features. In fact (A different transition here would be better because you're not building onto the sentence before, but changing to discuss your rental)we rented a car and we headed for random stops around the island.  In just one day of driving you can find seaside villages, sandy beaches, canyons, deserts, and narrow mountain streets that lead you through incredible landscapes.
We visited the dunes of Maspalomas and we took a camel tour through this incredible scenery.  We went hiking to Roque Nublo, which is a volcanic centre ( this is the British spelling, in the U.S. we write it Center). We drove without a destination, finding beautiful, isolated, and silent unspotted sea coves through the mountains, reachable only after hours of trekking.  We went snorkeling and surfing, and if we relaxed by the sea by day, by night we enjoyed a really vivacious nightlife.

We also visited picturesque villages such as the beautiful Puerto de Mogan, know as 'little Venice'.  We walked through the capital Las Palmas and its local crowded markets.
It was my best holiday because of the variety of landscapes and sceneries we enjoyed, and the many activities we could do without spending too much. We really had a good time, enjoying each other's company and celebrating our love.
I think we could have a better holiday just on next summer because we'll get married in June and we'll go To Maldives for our honeymoon. I can't wait for it!



I hope this helps!  The corrections I made just helps to make sure that it sounds a little more fluid and native.  

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