8 step to start your own business(Please someone correct this)
1--do not scare from the risk and accept you will take long time before your project start making money
2- do not think opportunities come rarely because you will feel despair early
3-no for a quick profit because we can avoid the pressure of the project and minimize essential cost.
"82% startup companies close because lack of money"
4- do not be negligent about money details so you can modify your plans on actually work not on expectations.
5- you shouldn't stop planning after you open your project so you can guarantee survival and development
6- do not be negligent about monitoring market because the main reason for startup companies bankruptcy they have a products the market doesn't need it
7- do not be negligent about the marketing and we know the task marketing is hard and tired but without it you will never reach your goal
8- do not hesitate to hire a new employees because of you depend on a small number of employees you will restrain progress of your project and prevent it from resources in special level
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Hi Mr. Hazem. I hope this helps.
I tried to highlight all of my corrections, but I may have missed some.
If I were you, I would work on learning when to have 'the' before a word and when not to. I would also work on trying to find other ways to say what you mean when you use 'so'.
Remember that it often helps to end the sentence and then start "This way" or "When you do this," or try rearranging the sentence completely so that you don't have to try to depend on 'so' or 'so that'. 'So' is confusing for English speakers when you use it this way because we use 'so' for many things (so much joy, so what?, so ... when are you going to come home, the performance was so-so). For us, 'so' carries a lot of emotional flavor depending on how you use it. When we want to use 'so' the way you have here, we usually rearrange the sentence or start a new one and assume that the reader will see that the first sentence causes the next. I know, it's a different way of reading.
Hope this helps! Sounds like you have a lot of experience in running a business!
Ben
8 steps for starting your own business(Please someone correct this)
1--do not be afraid of risk and accept that it will take a long time before your project will start making money2- do not think opportunities will never come because it's normal to feel despair early on
3-do not try to get a quick profit because you think that you will avoid the pressure of the project and minimize the essential cost.
"82% startup companies close because lack of money"
4- do not be negligent about money details so that you can modify your plans based on actual work not on expectations.
5- you shouldn't stop planning after you open your project. This way you can guarantee survival and development
6- do not be negligent about monitoring the market because the main reason for startup companies' bankruptcy is that they have products that the market doesn't need.
7- do not be negligent about marketing. We know the task of marketing is hard and tiring but without it you will never reach your goal
8- do not hesitate to hire new employees because if you depend on a small number of employees, you will restrain the progress of your project and prevent it from getting resources at a higher level
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