Same-sex marriage

More and more countries have started to allow same-sex marriage around the world. However, there are still countries which have punishment to same-sex couples. Such countries have say some reasons why they are against same-sex marriage. Most of these reasons are vague. I believe love is love and love should not be restricted. Loving a same-sex person is not a strange thing. However, people who do not accept new ideas and are discriminating have descrimination do not know so much about LGBT people. Therefore, what we can do is to spread information about LGBT and same- sex marriage. If there is are more information about LGBT in the world, same-sex love will become natural thing. Then, this society would accept be better for LGBT people coming out to come out their own sexuality and having/living happy lives.

Loving someone should not be prohibited. To begin with, let‘s get start to know about LGBT, spread information, and make the world one in which  there is have marriage equality.

More and more countries *are starting* to allow same-sex marriage around the world. However, there are still countries *that (which may be correct, but as a native speaker i can tell you "that" sounds better) punish* same-sex couples. Such countries say some reasons why they are against same-sex marriage. Most of these reasons are vague. I believe love is love and love should not be restricted. Loving *a person of the same-sex* is not *a* strange thing. However, people who do not accept *this* new idea and have d*i*scrimination *this next part you have seems redundant or unnecessary, does not really propel your argument* do not know so much about LGBT people. Therefore, what we can do is (*I got rid of the word to*) spread information about LGBT and same- sex marriage. If there *is* more information about LGBT in the world, same-sex love will be *(considered) a* natural thing. Then, this society would be *a better place* for LGBT people to come out *of* *the closet* and have *a* happy life.

Loving someone should not be prohibited. To begin with, let‘s start to know about LGBT *people*, spread information, and make *the* world *a place of* marriage equality.