Informal Letter
Hi Sarah,
Congratulations on your passing the driving test! Finally you can use the car you’ve got from you parents. We’ve just got home from London. Everything was perfect there expect the journey and the fact that we didn’t have a chance to meet up. It’s such a shame!
We took a flight from Vienna to Paris and then to London. We had to transit! What’s more, on the plane there was a baby crying the whole time and a old man spilled his wine into my lap. I simply hate flying.
Anyway, enjoyed every moment of our time in England. My hotel room had a spectacular view at Themses and since it was in the centre of London, we could easily get anywhere we wanted. We did a lot of sightseeing and were quite lucky because even very touristy areas weren’t as crowded as usual.
We saw a crime happening. I know it’s not something to be excited about but it was a very gripping experience. We were waiting for our dad to get tickets to a museum when a man snatch the purse of a woman sitting on a bench in front of us. The woman was quick - she managed to grab the purse and she pulled it back. She wouldn’t let it go until the man eventually gave up and ran away. A police officer, who saw the accident but was standing too far to help the woman, caught the mugger. It was very stupid of him to try to mug someone at such a crowded place with a lot of police around.
All in all, it was a lovely holiday. I’m really looking forward to visiting London again next week. What do you suggest we do together? Please let me know as soon as possible so I can start packing my clothes.
Love
Julia
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Informal Letter
Hi Sarah,Congratulations on your passing the driving test! Finally you can use the car you got from you parents. We’ve just got home from London. Everything was perfect there. Expect the journey and the fact that we didn’t have a chance to meet up. It’s such a shame!
We took a flight from Vienna to Paris and then to London. We had to transit! What’s more, on the plane there was a baby crying the whole time and a old man spilled his wine on my lap. I simply hate flying.
Anyway, I enjoyed every moment of our time in England. My hotel room had a spectacular view of the Thames and since it was in the centre of London we could easily get anywhere we wanted. We did a lot of sightseeing and were quite lucky because even very touristy areas weren’t as crowded as usual.
We saw a crime happening. I know it’s not something to be excited about but it was a very gripping experience. We were waiting for our dad to get tickets to a museum when a man snatched the purse of a woman sitting on a bench in front of us. The woman was quick - she managed to grab the purse and pull it back. She wouldn’t let it go until the man eventually gave up and ran away. A police officer, who saw the incident but was standing too far to help the woman, caught the mugger. It was very stupid of him to try to mug someone in such a crowded place with a lot of police around.
All in all, it was a lovely holiday. I’m really looking forward to visiting London again next week. What do you suggest we do together? Please let me know as soon as possible so I can start packing my clothes.
Love
Julia
Very well written!
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could you tell me what is the meaning of *all in all *
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Moras em qual país?
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