Instructions For a Guest
Dear Dani,
Welcome to my flat, I suppose that you are quite tired after 12 hours travelling so that I don’t want you to be bored, just only a few notes for you to be read.
Firstly, you need to switch the boiler on if you intend to take a shower. Also, If you feel the home a little bit cold you can switch the heaters on. Mind you, the power is so expensive, please keeping and eye for it and switch it off if you don’t really need or you go away from home.
If you cook, only beware to turn the gas off when you finish, forgetting the gas on is one of the things more dangerous. It actually scares me.
And, finally, please write down my phone number in your mobile phone and don’t hesitate to call me if you have any problem or doubt.
Make yourself at home, I hope your stay in Madrid will be comfortable and enjoyable.
See you soon
A huge hug
Thank you in advance for your review.
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Dear Dani,
Welcome to my flat. I suppose that you are quite tired after 12 hours of travelling. It had to be a bit boring, wasn't it? However, here is some notes I'd like you to read.
First, you need to switch the boiler on if you intend to take a shower. Also, If you feel the home a little bit cold you can switch the heaters on. Kindly note that electricity isn't as cheap, turning off what you don't really need would be appreciated.
If you cook, only beware leaving the gas on when you finish. Forgetting the gas on actually scares me and might cause a lot of harm.
And finally, please keep my phone number in your phone contacts. Don’t hesitate to call me if you have any problem or doubt.
Make yourself at home, I hope your stay in Madrid will be comfortable and enjoyable.
See you soon..
A huge hug,
NAME.
Thank you in advance for your review.
Welcome to my flat. I suppose that you are quite tired after 12 hours of travelling. It had to be a bit boring, wasn't it? However, here is some notes I'd like you to read.
First, you need to switch the boiler on if you intend to take a shower. Also, If you feel the home a little bit cold you can switch the heaters on. Kindly note that electricity isn't as cheap, turning off what you don't really need would be appreciated.
If you cook, only beware leaving the gas on when you finish. Forgetting the gas on actually scares me and might cause a lot of harm.
And finally, please keep my phone number in your phone contacts. Don’t hesitate to call me if you have any problem or doubt.
Make yourself at home, I hope your stay in Madrid will be comfortable and enjoyable.
See you soon..
A huge hug,
NAME.
Thank you in advance for your review.
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Your mistakes mostly relate to diction and messy adverbs. There was some tiny punctuation errors, mostly unnecessary commas. In the overall, you've done a good job so keep it up.
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Dear Dani,
Welcome to my flat. I suppose that you are quite tired after 12 hours of travelling. It had to be a bit boring, wasn't it? However, here is some notes I'd like you to read.
First, you need to switch the boiler on if you intend to take a shower. Also, If you feel the home a little bit cold you can switch the heaters on. Kindly note that electricity isn't as cheap, turning off what you don't really need would be appreciated.
If you cook, only beware leaving the gas on when you finish. Forgetting the gas on actually scares me and might cause a lot of harm.
And finally, please keep my phone number in your phone contacts. Don’t hesitate to call me if you have any problem or doubt.
Make yourself at home, I hope your stay in Madrid will be comfortable and enjoyable.
See you soon..
A huge hug,
NAME.
Thank you in advance for your review.
Welcome to my flat. I suppose that you are quite tired after 12 hours of travelling. It had to be a bit boring, wasn't it? However, here is some notes I'd like you to read.
First, you need to switch the boiler on if you intend to take a shower. Also, If you feel the home a little bit cold you can switch the heaters on. Kindly note that electricity isn't as cheap, turning off what you don't really need would be appreciated.
If you cook, only beware leaving the gas on when you finish. Forgetting the gas on actually scares me and might cause a lot of harm.
And finally, please keep my phone number in your phone contacts. Don’t hesitate to call me if you have any problem or doubt.
Make yourself at home, I hope your stay in Madrid will be comfortable and enjoyable.
See you soon..
A huge hug,
NAME.
Thank you in advance for your review.
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