fireworks diary
I went to south bank station to see fireworks 31 th on Dec. Actually I had no idea where I should go. South bank or south brisbane.
Most people took off at south bank station and I followed them. And I found the bridge as soon as I went out of the station. The were many people leaning over a railing. I stood in the middle on the bridge too.
I knew that first fireworks start 8 pm and I arrived at almost that time. But it wasn’t fact.
It was 8:30pm. Then I should have waited for 30min. I ended up seeing fireworks and I think It looks so beautiful whenever I see that. But it never be sick of.
My plan was that I see both of all, 8:30pm 12am. But I couldn’t because I felt tired and like going home. That’s why I just went home after eating a hamburger at mosburger.
I was able to hear fireworks sounds and I regret that I came back home so early a little bit. Next day my house mate show me 12am fireworks video. There were set off fireworks much better thank first one. And I regretted a lot . It was so beautiful, wonderful and fantastic. I think I couldn’t help it.
Anyway happy new year!❤
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fireworks diary
I went to South Bank station to see the fireworks on December 31st (on New Years Eve). 31 th on Dec. Actually I had no idea where I should go. South Bank or South Brisbane. (capital letters for names of people and places)Most people got off at South Bank station and I followed them. And I found the bridge where the fireworks were going to be as soon as I went out of/exited/left the station. The were many people leaning over the railing. I stood in the middle on the bridge too.
I thoguht that first fireworks started 8 pm and I arrived at around that time. But it wasn’t right; they started at 8:30pm. Then I would have had to wait for 30min. I ended up seeing fireworks and I think It looks so beautiful whenever I see that. But it never be sick of. unclear (I never tire of seeing fireworks, they look so beautiful?
My plan was to see both sets/displays of fireworks, the one at 8:30pm and the one at 12am. But I didn't because I felt tired and felt like going home. That’s why, after eating a hamburger at mosburger, I just went home.
I was able to hear the sound of the fireworks and I regret a little bit that I came back home so early/ The next day my house mate showed me a video of the midnight fireworks. They were much better than the first one. And I regretted missing them a lot .they were so beautiful, wonderful and fantastic. I think I couldn’t help it. unclear what "it" refers to (What is it that you couldn't help?)
Anyway happy new year!❤
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I went to south bank station to see fireworks 31 th on Dec. Actually I had no idea where I should go. South bank or south brisbane. Most people took off at south bank station and I followed them. And I found the bridge as soon as I went out of the station. The were many people leaning over a railing. I stood in the middle of the bridge too. I knew that the first fireworks start at 8 pm and I arrived at almost that time. But it wasn’t in fact. They started at 8:30pm. So I should have waited 30min. I ended up seeing fireworks and I think they look so beautiful whenever I see them. And i never get sick of them. My plan was that I would see both of them, 8:30pm and 12am. But I couldn’t because I felt tired and felt like going home. That’s why I just went home after eating a hamburger at mosburger. I was able to hear firework sounds and I regret that I came back home so early. Next day my house mate show me the 12am fireworks video. There set off fireworks much better thank first ones. And I regretted it a lot . It was so beautiful, wonderful and fantastic. I think I couldn’t help it. Anyway happy new year!❤
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