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The unexpected fireworks show I went to a hot spring tonight. That was really making me surprise! The hot spring hotel had a fireworks show for celebrating the new year. So when I had finished the hot spring,then I enjoyed the wonderful fireworks show. It was so beautiful and everyone exclaimed with delight. Happy new year! Hope that everyone will have a good year. Although there had something sad this year but it still had a lot of wonderful things! The new year will become better! My new year’s resolution is to work out of my body and learn English hard.

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The unexpected fireworks show

This evening i went  to  the Hotsprings and  got the surprise of my life .Apparently there was an epic fireworks show to celebrate  the new year. 

So when I was done with the  hot spring, i got the chance to enjoy the wonderful fireworks show.
It was so beautiful and everyone exclaimed with delight.
Happy new year! Hope that everyone will have a good year.
Although there were sad moments in 2018 I hope 2019 will be a better year.
My new year’s resolution is to work out  ,eat healthy and focus on learning English with determination.

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The unexpected fireworks show

I went to a hot spring tonight and had a great time! The hot spring hotel had a fireworks show to celebrate the new year.
So after having finished in the hot spring, I then enjoyed the wonderful fireworks show.
It was so beautiful and everyone exclaimed with delight.
Happy new year! I Hope that everyone else will have a good year.
Although there were some sad events this year it still had a lot of wonderful things!
The New Year will become better!
My New Year’s resolution is to work out often and put a lot of effort into my English studies.
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Hope you are having a wonderful new year at the hotsprings hotel

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