A love letter
2018 was a great year for us, looking back at the past, I can see how much Joys we had, how many happiness we acquired and how great the achievements we made both in our relationship and our career.
Our bond has grown stronger as time passed by. Precious things are very few in this world. That is why there is just one you, look into my eyes, you will see what you mean to me.
Wandering in the park, working out in the gym, spending time for talking……These are tedious activities in most people’s eyes, but they have never bored us even walking outside in this freezing winter. Wherever we are, we could feel the warm in our hearts.
After the only special night we sent together, you told me that even that was the first time in your life to stay with someone a whole night outside, you felt very comfortable and everything happened naturally, I am sure you know what did I feel that night, words are unnecessary between two loving hearts.
There is an old Chinese saying “There is a great resemblance between the couple”, This morning I looked myself in the mirror for a long time which I had never checked myself as careful as today, I had found that was not only the mole above our mouth as the unique mark as we are a couple, we share the similar skin color, hair and ears……We are fated to be each other.
The upcoming new year holiday will separate us for more than 20 days, that would be an incredible hard time for me, because I miss you so much already we haven’t even left each other!
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A Love Letter
2018 was a great year for us. Looking back at the past, I can see how much Joys we had, how much happiness we acquired, and the great the achievements we made, both in our relationship and our careers.Our bond has grown stronger as time has passed by. Precious things are very few in this world. That is why there is just one you. Look into my eyes and you will see what you mean to me.
Wandering in the park, working out in the gym, spending time for talking……These are tedious activities in most people’s eyes, but they have never bored us, even walking outside in this freezing winter. Wherever we are, we can feel the warmth in our hearts.
After the only special night we spent together, you told me that even that it was the first time in your life that you stayed with someone a whole night outside. You felt very comfortable and everything happened naturally. I am sure you know what did I felt that night; words are unnecessary between two loving hearts.
There is an old Chinese saying “There is a great resemblance between the couple.” This morning I looked at myself in the mirror for a long time; which I had never checked myself as careful as today and I found that it was not only the mole above our mouth that is the unique mark we have as a couple; we share the similar skin color, hair and ears……We are fated to be with each other.
The upcoming new year holiday will separate us for more than 20 days. That will be an incredibly hard time for me, because I miss you so much already and we haven’t even left each other!
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Very tuching from the bottom of you heart .
Very difficult to correct the errors because they are part of the poetry of the text .
Happy new year ;))
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Please help me revise my letter, thank you!
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sweet!!
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good job
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