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Ukraine flagVanya Polyakov
Check it please Hi Tom. I'm really happy about your invitation to your parents cottage.But I must explain you that at the weekend my cousin John come from Italy to me and I couldn't throw him.I know him all my life and he would be happy if I spend weekend with him.I want to tell and show him all interesting places in our city be like: Freedom square,The Zoo, Theater of the Young Spectator,seafront. Of course I want visit The amusement park and enjoy all attraction,in my opinion he will be very happy and enthusiastic.If you want to join us you always welcome! Best Wishes Mary

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Hi Tom,
I'm really happy about your invitation to your parent's cottage. But I must explain to you, however, that at on the same weekend, my cousin, John, is come coming from Italy to visit me and I couldn't throw turn him by away. I have known him all my life and he would be happy if I spentd the weekend with him. I want to tell him about, and show him all the interesting places in our city be like: Freedom Square,The Zoo, Theater of the Young Spectator, the seafront.
Of course I want to visit the amusement park and enjoy all the attraction sites. In my opinion, he will be very happy and enthusiastic. If you want to join us, you are always welcome!

Best Wishes,

Mary
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Hi Tom,
I'm really happy about your invitation to your parent's cottage. But I must explain to you, however, that at on the same weekend, my cousin, John, is come coming from Italy to visit me and I couldn't throw turn him by away. I have known him all my life and he would be happy if I spentd the weekend with him. I want to tell him about, and show him all the interesting places in our city be like: Freedom Square,The Zoo, Theater of the Young Spectator, the seafront.
Of course I want to visit the amusement park and enjoy all the attraction sites. In my opinion, he will be very happy and enthusiastic. If you want to join us, you are always welcome!

Best Wishes,

Mary

Hello. I apologize because I see I uploaded two corrections. They are the same so you can ignore one. 
It's a very nice and well-thought out entry. If you have a question, feel free to ask. 
All the best! 

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