Correct me please
Futur video on the Christmas day.
Hello language marathon friend's,
Laurianne wanted I tell you my Christmas day so, this is it....
My Christmas eve meal was in my house.
My father, my sister, her husband and her childrens were come.
I had prépare the meal all alone.
We had a good evening together, a good eated and good drank
My sister's children were impatient to have the gifts.
I will show you my Christmas tree in wood with my owls, hedgehog and wooden squirell.
I love it!
They is always gifts because my nephew and my nieces weren't come back.
Never let children whitout surveillance because they do that otherwise.
I was my Chrismas day my friends.
I hope your Chrismas day is good also...
Bye, bye
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Correct me please
Futur video on Christmas day.Hello language exchange friends,
I am Laurianne and I want to tell you about my Christmas day so here it is....
I had my Christmas Eve meal at home.
My father, my sister, her husband and her children came too.
I had prepared the meal all by myself.
We had a good evening together, we ate and we drank well.
My sister's children were impatient to get their gifts.
I will show you my wooden Christmas tree along with my owls, hedgehog and wooden squirell.
I love it!
There were some gifts left because my nephew and my nieces went off and didn't come back.
Never leave children without surveillance(unsupervised) because they will otherwise do that(run off?).
This was my Chrismas day my friends.
I hope your Chrismas day was good as well...
Bye, bye
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