The first time that I went to a cinema by myself
The movie "Einstein and Einstein" I watched today (22 Dec 2018) was actually released in 2013 but it had been banned for being too realistic. It is on in movie theatres recently. The Chinese name of this film is “狗十三”, which means "Dog Thirteen". It talked about a story of a thirteen-year-old girl growing up in a divorced family and she had a dog named Einstein. The teenage girl believed there are several parallel universes, where the things we didn't finish will be completed in some universe and wrong choices we made will be correct.
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The first time I went to the cinema by myself
The movie "Einstein and Einstein" that I watched today (22 Dec 2018) was actually released in 2013 but was banned for being too realistic. It is showing in movie theatres at the moment. The Chinese name of this film is “狗十三”, which means "Dog Thirteen". It talks about a story of a thirteen-year-old girl growing up in a divorced family and she has a dog named Einstein. The teenage girl believes there are several parallel universes, where the things we don't finish will be completed in some other universes and the wrong choices we make will be corrected.(Please could you proofread it?)
Great work, you just need to take care when using the present tense and the past tense!
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