Sticking in the past
Have you ever stuck in your past and you could not move foreword?
You want to move on your life but you can't.
You have tried many times but there's something pull you to the bottom.
Your body want to stand but your brain couldn't.
You shake your body times after times but the brain resists.
Many hands trying to help by catching your hand but you can't stand.
You still sticking and you can't move away until you heard that's sound he is telling you are strong you can do it don't give up the future is gone be OK yeah you felt it you can move your leg you can stand power running again in your body and told the brain you can do it.
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Have you ever been stuck in the past and been unable to move forward? You want to move on with your life but you can't. You have tried many times but there's something pulling you down. Your body wants to stand but your brain can't manage. You shake your body time after time but the brain resists. Many hands try to help by catching yours, but you can't stand. You're still stuck and you can't move away, until you hear the sound he's making/ hear what he's telling you: "You are strong, you can do it, don't give up. The future is going to be OK". Yeah you felt it! You can move your leg, you can stand, power is running though your body again, and is telling the brain that it's ready.
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Being Stuck in the Past
Have you ever been stuck in the past and not able to move forward?You want to move on with your life but you can't.
You have tried many times but something keeps pulling you down to the bottom.
Your body wants to stand but your brain doesn't.
You shake your body time after time but your brain resists.
Many hands try to help by catching yours but you can't stand.
You're still stuck and you can't move on until you hear the sound of him telling you that you are strong and that you can do it. Don't give up! The future is going to be OK. yeah you felt it you can move your leg you can stand power running again in your body and told the brain you can do it. (This sentence needs revising - I don't know what you're trying to say)
I hope this is helpful
Nicola
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Your knowledge of the vocabulary is good, but you need to be careful with tense: don't change tense in the middle of a sentence. For example, this sentence is incorrect:
"Yesterday, I wanted to go to the shop, but I can't".
You're talking about yourself in the past, so you should use a past tense form of the verb. This is the correct sentence:
"Yesterday, I wanted to go to the shop, but I couldn't".
You can change tense in the paragraph if it makes sense, but don't do it too much, it becomes confusing.
Hope this helps, good luck!!!
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