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Precious experiences are gained by traveling, for this reason, I like to travel alone.
The advantage of traveling alone is that I can explore as much as I want and I can arrange the schedule whenever I want. As a fan of history, I can stay at the museusm and learn as much as I want.
Traveling with family, sure it would solid family relationships, but as there’re generation gaps between parents and kids, unpleasant may occur due to these gaps.
As a result, I prefer to travel alone.
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Precious experiences are gained by traveling. For this reason, I like to travel alone. The advantages of traveling alone is that I can explore as much as I want, and I can also arrange the schedule whenever I want. Additionally, as a fan of history, I can stay at the museum and learn as much as I want.Traveling with family sure would solidify family relationships, but as there are generational gaps between parents and children, unpleasantness may occur--due to these gaps. It is for all these reasons that I prefer traveling alone.
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