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Before, if someone had said to me the STREET OF RED LIGHT I would think about Amsterdam with legal drugs and easy “love”.
Now when I hear about “street of red lights” I rather imagine red Chinese lanterns that look absolutely incredible at night. And they make me believe in Chinese mysticism.
It is possible to see the lantern festivals in Beijing, Nanjing, Shanghai and Hangzhou. They have colorful unique shows. I hope to see them during Spring Festival. "Spring Festival" is the name of the Chinese New Year. It has a different name because in 1911 China adopted the Gregorian calendar and the Chinese New Year was renamed the "Spring Festival", a bit incongruous for a holiday in February. But here in Shanghai it makes sense. There is no winter spirit, no low temperature, now we have +15C and still green trees somewhere hahahah. So I am eager to greet Chinese Spring Festival in China and take more and more photos of red lanterns.

Very well written!

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Before if someone had said to me the "STREET OF RED LIGHTS", I would think have thought about Amsterdam with legal drugs and easy “love”.
Now when I hear about the “street of red lights”, I rather instead imagine red Chinese lanterns that look absolutely incredible at night and they make me believe in the Chinese mystic spirit.
It is possible to see the lantern festivals in Beijing, Nanjing, Shanghai and Hangzhou where they have colorful unique shows. I hope to see them during the Spring Festival. Spring festival is a the name of the Chinese New Year. It has a different name because in 1911 China adopted the Gregorian calendar and the Chinese New Year was renamed the Spring Festival. A bit of a weird name of the for a holiday in February, but here in Shanghai it makes sense. There is no winter spirit, no low temperature, now we are in it's +15 degrees and there are still green trees somewhere around hahahah. So I am eager to meet celebrate/see the Chinese Spring Festival in China and take more and more photos of red lanterns.

Good entry, you should do some exercises involving articles to make sure you fully understand their uses. Also, don't be afraid to add extra clauses into your sentences instead of writing short sentences. Short sentences is a writing device used mostly in literature to add suspense, so it doesn't really suit the nature or style of your entry.

Please correct me

Before if someone said to me the STREET OF RED LIGHT i would think about Amsterdam with its legal drugs and easy “love”.
Now when I hear about the “street of red lights” I instead imagine red Chinese lanterns that look absolutely incredible at night. And they make me believe in the  Chinese mystical spirit.
It is possible to see the lantern festivals in Beijing, Nanjing, Shanghai and Hangzhou. They have colorful unique shows. I hope to see them during the Spring Festival. The Spring festival is the name of the Chinese New Year. It has a different name because in 1911 China adopted the Gregorian calendar and Chinese New Year was renamed the Spring Festival. A bit of a weird name since the holiday is in February. But here in Shanghai it makes sense. There is no winter spirit and no low temperature. Now it is  +15 and there are still green trees in some places... hahahah! So I am eager to see The Chinese Spring Festival in China and take many photos of the red lanterns.

Great work, i would revise the use of the articles! 

Please correct me

Before if someone said to me the STREET OF RED LIGHT I would think about Amsterdam with legal drugs and easy “love”
Now when I hear about “street of red lights” I rather imagine red Chinese lanterns that look absolutely incredible at night. And they make me believe in Chinese mystic spirit.
It is possible to see the lantern festivals in Beijing, Nanjing, Shanghai and Hangzhou. They have colorful unique shows. I hope to see them during Spring Festival. Spring festival is a name of Chinese New Year. It has a different name because in 1911 China adopted the Gregorian calendar and Chinese New Year was renamed to the Spring Festival. A bit weird name of the holiday in February. But here in Shanghai it makes sense. There is no winter spirit, no low temperature, now it is +15 and the trees are still green somewhere hahahah So I am eager to meet Chinese Spring Festival in China and take more and more photos of red lanterns.