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Tour To Victoria Last night I've applied for a day tour of Victoria with Veltra which is a famous Japanese tour company thinking that the next Saturday would be better if we go out to a far place. And I got a confirmation e-mail today. Victoria and Butchart Garden one day tour from Vancouver, with lunch in Fairmont Empress Hotel, Japanese guide. I was relieved to succeed to make the reservation because It was written that it may be impossible to take seats as our apply was just before. I think that it is good to enjoy traveling with a Japanese guide at the end. I'm so excited! I can't wait! On Sunday, we have to prepare for the next day's departure to Japan after visiting some nearby places.

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Tour to Victoria (👍)

Last night, I've applied for a day tour ofto Victoria with Veltra which is , a famous Japanese tour company. I thinking that the next Saturday would be better if we go out to a far place. And I got a confirmation e-mail today. I got an email confirming our appointment. Next saturday is ideal to relax and go to a far place. :)

Victoria and Butchart Garden one day tour from Vancouver, wit h lunch in Fairmont Empress Hotel, Japanese guide.

The tour package includes, a lunch in fairmont empress hotel,  a japanese tourguide and a car transfer from vancouver. (i hope this is what you want to express.  )


I was relieved to succeed to make in making the reservation. because It was written that it may be impossible to take seats as our apply was just before. The application process is difficult,  I failed to make an appointment last time.  I think that it is good  I [will enjoy traveling with a Japanese guide at the end. I'm so excited! I can't wait!

On Sunday, we have to prepare for the next day's departure to Japan, after visiting some nearby places.
 After our tour to some nearby place, on sunday, we will be preparing our departure to Japan. 


I am cheering for you!  :)
I personally think ur expressing ur ideas right.  You just have work with your paragraph structure.

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Tour of Victoria

Last night I've applied for a day tour of Victoria with Veltra which is a famous Japanese tour company thinking that the next Saturday would be better if we  to go out to a far place. And I got a confirmation e-mail today.

Victoria and Butchart Garden one day tour from Vancouver, with lunch in Fairmont Empress Hotel, Japanese guide.

I was relieved to succeed in making the reservation because it was written that it may be impossible to take reserve seats as our application was late just before. I think that it is good to enjoy traveling with a Japanese guide at the end of my trip. I'm so excited! I can't wait!
On Sunday, after visiting some nearby places, we have to prepare for the next day's departure to Japan after visiting some nearby places.


Very good  -  let me know if you have any questions.

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