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Chritsmas is coming... Chritsmas is coming... What are you going to do the Chritsmas day? I am so excited, I love Chritsmas! I like the Chritsmas air, the lights in the streets, the grilled chestnut stands, remembering the ilusion of my chilhood. I love meeting with my family, parents, uncles, aunts and cousins. We used to celebrate this day in my grandparents house but now they passed away we meet us in my uncle house. We miss so much the people don't already are with us and we try remember the best of them. My mother and my aunts cooking for all family and we are a lot, when the moment of the rings come (Spanish tradition) all of us try to keep silence but with so persons it's a impossible mission. Then we ate the twelve grapes come the kiss moment and we are like ten minutes or more kissing the people cheek, a new year is starting and we desire to the others a happy year.

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Christmas is coming... 

What are you going to do the on Christmas day?

I am so excited, I love Christmas! I like the Christmas air, the lights in the streets, the grilled chestnut stands, remembering the illusion* of my childhood. I love meeting with my family, parents, uncles, aunts and cousins. We used to celebrate this day in at my grandparents’ house, but now that they have passed away we meet us in at my uncle’s house. We miss so much the people don't already are who aren’t with us anymore and we try to remember the best of them. 

My mother and my aunts cooking for all the whole family and we are a lot of people. When the moment of the rings comes (a Spanish tradition) all of us try to keep silent but with so persons many people it's an impossible mission. Then Once we ate eat the twelve grapes, then come the kissing moment arrives and we are like spend ten minutes or more kissing the people on the cheek. A new year is starting and we desire to wish the others a happy year.

*One note: "Ilusión" en español puede significar "alegría, entusiasmo" pero en inglés significa que la niñez era ilusoria, como un sueño. Es más poético, me parece. Did you mean "excitement"?

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