Internet
An Internet does our live easier. We can find all information in a few minutes, to have lessons with everyone from the other side of world and other good things. But here is other part of the internet: we spent a lot of time here without purpose in different social networks. We seldom read good books. I have heard interview of one of the good scientist who told that the level of our mental abilities have became lower because for us easier to find information in the internet than to think. And he gave an example that Bill Gates allow his children to use internet only for two hours a day. #moreфон2018
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Internet
An Internet does our live easier. We can find all information in a few minutes, to have lessons with everyone from the other side of world and other good things. But here is other part of the internet: we spent a lot of time here without purpose in different social networks. We seldom read good books. I have heard interview of one of the good scientist who told that the level of our mental abilities have became lower because for us easier to find information in the internet than to think. And he gave an example that Bill Gates allow his children to use internet only for two hours a day. #moreфон2018Молодец! Я всё понял.
The internet makes our lives easier. We can find any information in a few minutes, have lessons with anyone from the other side of the world, and other good things. But there is another side to the internet: we spend a lot of time here without purpose in different social networks. We seldom read good books. I have heard an interview with a reputable scientist who said that the level of our mental abilities has become lower because it is easier for us to find information on the internet than to think. As an example, he mentioned Bill Gates who allows his children to use the internet for only two hours a day.
I rephrased your notebook entry to make it sound more natural to an American English speaker. You're dealing with complex grammar and managing it pretty well. Also, all Russians struggle with a, an, and the. To confuse matters more, American and British speakers use them differently.
Also, I couldn't agree more with what you said. We can master small details, but are losing the ability to understand them in their context.
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The Internet makes our lives easier. We can find any information in a few minutes, have lessons with someone from the other side of world and other good things. But there is another part of the internet: we spend a lot of time here without purpose using different social networks. We seldom read good books. I have heard of an interview with a good scientist who said that our mental abilities have become lower because it is easier for us to find information on the internet than to think. And he gave an example that Bill Gates allows his children to use the internet for only two hours a day. #moreфон2018Good job, you used some hard words correctly! It is hard to recognize when to use “in” and when to use “on.” When Americans are talking about the internet we usually say “on the internet.” For example, “I’m on the internet learning English.” Good job!
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An The internet does made our life easier. We can find all information in a few minutes. If you want to have lessons with anyone from the other side of the world and other good things. But here is other part the disadvsntage of the internet: we spend a lot of time here without purpose in different social networks. We seldom read good books. I have heard interview of one of with a good scientist who told said that the level of our mental abilities have became lower because it became easier for us to find information in the internet than to think. And he gave an example that Bill Gates allow his children to use internet only for two hours a day. #moreфон2018I have noticed some mistakes and wanted to correct them though I am not a native speaker.
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