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"The pen is mightier than the sword”. The railway trains in India are not so clean. Most of the trains are terribly dirty. I had a very bad experience when I traveled from Ahmedabad to Bangalore (India). During the journey my compartment was really very filthy and messy. I requested to the ticket master for cleaning the compartment. He answered me to wait for few hours. I was waiting for the next station. My journey was about to 36 hours and I had already spent almost 15 hours in the dirty second AC coach. After few hours train reached at Hubli station. I was waiting for the sweepers. Nobody came. I disappointed. One of my neighbors was a teacher and he decided to complain about to sweepers. He called the ticket master and wrote everything about the sweepers’ laziness and bad attitude. He was very keen person. He said to all passengers that I am Indian and I have a concern about the cleanliness. Now the complaint was urged. Suddenly when we reached the next station all the compartments of the train was cleaned. Each and every coach was washed by the sweepers. Teacher and I just murmured and smiled. I saluted his concern and civic sense. In fact it is our duty to clean our compartments and it is more important to fight for public properties. "The pen is mightier than the sword”.

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"The pen is mightier than the sword”.

The railway trains in India are not so clean. Most of the trains are terribly dirty. I had a very bad experience when I traveled from Ahmedabad to Bangalore (India). During the journey my compartment was really very filthy and messy. I requested to the ticket master for  to have cleaning the compartment cleaned. He answered told me to wait for few hours. I was waiting for the next station. My journey was about to 36 hours and I had already spent almost 15 hours in the dirty second AC coach. After few hours the train reached at Hubli station. I was waiting for the sweepers. Nobody came. I was disappointed. One of my neighbors was a teacher and he decided to complain about to sweepers. He called the ticket master and wrote everything about the sweepers’ laziness and bad attitude. He was very keen person. He said to all passengers that I am Indian and I have a concern about the cleanliness. Now the complaint was urged urgent. Suddenly when we reached the next station all the compartments of the train was were cleaned. Each and every coach was washed by the sweepers. My teacher and I just murmured and smiled. I saluted his concern and civic sense. In fact it is our duty to clean our compartments and it is more important to fight for public properties. "The pen is mightier than the sword

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You have written right thing but there is need of some grammatical corrections(Direct and Indirect Speech).
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yeah , u r right , u must try the trains from China , that will be much more better than others! Good luck to u !

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