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Paragraph Hi guys. I wrote a paragraph for my English class at university. I would be very grateful if someone could check my mistakes..Thanks! The raise of awareness, standing up for the ones who are bulled and the talks with parents are the ways to avoid bullying at schools. To raise the awareness of the problem of bullying there should be organized every-week classroom discussions about the reasons and effects of bullying. These kinds of meetings ought to be prepared not only among the students, who should be taught how to behave in the moments of bullying. What is more, it is very important to sensibilise parents to the accurance of the problem or the possibility of it. Kids who are aware of what bullying is, can better (80) identify the problem and know how to behave. As the multiple researches show, parents are often the last to know (100) when their child is being bullied or has bullied others, so it is essential to encourage parents to talk with their children every day about their social lives. In the case of bullying, we should show to bullies our disapproval of their actions, as the authors often crave for an audience and attention. The witnesses should demonstrate a condemnation of their behavior and attempts to make the bully feel empathy for the children he or she harmed. These examples clearly demonstrate the ways to prevent bullying at school by the raise of awareness among the students, the importance of talks with parents and standing up for the bullied children.

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